Truth Be Told-part1 [mlp Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

Holy moley, this was an awesome story to mind to! Makes me appreciate My Little Pony once more than after then many years!
- teamidrisVor 2 years ⁺¹
  
  wow, I didn't wait that outcome when i was fighting theending :) Welcome back.
"Am i .........Sun-butt?"
LOL PRICELESS
- unfortunatewitnessXVor four years ⁺³
  
  Julie Jiang LittleShyFiM made that same joke in his ain parody video, History of Equestria.
The audio manipulation in this was so cool.
Interactions betwixt sentients with such unlike views on reality, this was very entertaining.
I love this concept. Screw Skynet, A.I. Ponies shall be the new overlords one day. XD
Great Story, That was really well told with cracking voice acting.
dude, I would exist scared out of my listen if this actually happened.
- Paul DawsonVor 4 years ⁺³
  
  RAT FINK it probably already has
When Celestia was created.. "Am I Lord's day-Butt?" XD
- unfortunatewitnessXVor 4 years
  
  Shadowthekatt Does aj LittleShyFiM made that same joke in his own parody video, History of Equestria.
Vivid, visualising the characters was an easy task
That was then epic! I thoroughly enjoyed that story!
- Thomas BaughmanVor 4 years
  
  Nice profile pic. Overnice to see another Zelda fan in the comments
Showtime off, let me say I absolutely *beloved* the sound pattern in this. The computerized background noises used throughout coupled with the song glitching actually sold the setting, and I'd dearest to know what songs you used so I could listen to them alone, because they sounded great.
That said, I plant the story itself to... it was a proficient concept that tripped on the execution. I ordinarily like these kinds of stories, the kind that accept an outlandish starting concept and explore it, only I plant the writing to be lackluster, and it kind of saddens me to read the comments and come across people think it be really good. I plant information technology fairly obvious that the writer didn't have much familiarity with the real-life things he was using in the story.
- Lord LunaEquie is meVor six years
  
  @teamidris Yes, now that you mention that I think I listened to it. I absolutely *love* Neighrator's voice.
- teamidrisVor 6 years
  
  +Kraigon42
  Yes, "Fish in the Clouds" was narrated past Neighrator-Pony and we put it on my channel. (He has a couple of lines in Tigger Tank likewise, every bit does Lost)
  This was a commission and it went on Lost's channel.
  Hopefully Neighrator-Pony is voicing "Fish and Lilypad", which is very heady because he's good and considering it has Jowy Bean Title art. (It is seriously All The Squee :o) )
  Great Talking to you lot as well. Meet yous effectually the net.
- Lord LunaEquie is meVor 6 years ^+one
  
  Oasis't I seen a reading of "Fish in the Clouds" somewhere?
  Those are all off-white enough, and as a bit of a author for a fanfiction customs myself (albeit for M:tG instead of MLP), I tin sympathize having to simplify and cut fabric. I hadn't realized it was that short a piece, since most of these readings I never end upwards reading the originals.
  I don't think I tin add any more at this point, since it'due south been... * checks comment date * over a calendar week since I listened to this and at this point I call back more of the broad strokes than the details of the story. I should bookmark the fimfiction page or something and so I call up to read it later.
  Great talking with you, though. Glad we could accept this discussion (and peradventure again later).
- teamidrisVor half-dozen years
  
  +Kraigon42 - Give thanks yous for taking an interest in the basics and bolts of the slice.
  You lot kind of have to abuse the hell out logic sometimes to make these things work? At 600mph you don't run across the missile and I doubt you lot would run across the smoke trail, just it is too good an opportunity to miss. I wanted that switch from "Hell yea, gonna kick some donkey" to; "I'thou merely minor and I just made things a lot worse and am helpless". I had planned to exercise a full plane 'take over' and how the tech got fitted at the air base. I basically shredded a load of concepts similar that when I changed the mane 6 from pro-active monsters to hapless do-gooders. It really was quite a nasty and disturbing work until that point. Less was definitely better though.
  (I actually wanted Rara clapping her hooves together with delight every bit the tank threw its turret. The residue was a writing vehicle to go there)
  The other bit is a quick fix on their part; To shove all 7 billion folk in the 3%. Purple is all about planning and organising. She tin't see what cities are for? To her they just look logistically resource hungry. When all said and done it is no more than a social perspective on my part. To many ships and lorries run effectually the world driven past price rather than mutual sense. We buy stuff from People's republic of china while our own factories are legislated and taxed out of existence. So we borrow money from China. It's mad?
  I threw Imperial in there with more of a 'flat earth' mind set. They did take more than understanding of how their thoughts lived in the servers, just it was a slow read then I scrapped that likewise. Its 8000 words, but I probably wrote 11k for the entire work before I took a machete to it for 'flow' every bit I went.
  Aiming these things at an audition is difficult. I have to say I am very pleased with it because my first story was written on April 6th and the build engagement on this story is only "April" and so this is only a month later I started writing. I think "Fish in the Clouds" is a better 'read' though? Considering I learn as I get :o)
You made really adept use of glitch mob while making this most ration. I also Love the use of the Tron soundtrack.
What track was that during the part where twilight and applejack were using a spy satellite though?
So let me get this straight this ponys are communicating with humans now THATS CRAZY 😋😋😋
- comic sansVor 3 years
  
  It might be a creepypasta but atleast theres actually one that hqs contact with both worlds
Observation Log.
17:00 Did they discover ISS?
28:10 This is non friendship, non friendship at all.
39:10 Information technology went dark then fast.
46:l _sarcastically_ Lets pat ourselves on the back, cheer.
48:12: _uncertain_ Celestia to the rescue?
l:10 Nope
51:x Woah, where did you came from?
- teamidrisVor five years ⁺²
  
  "51:10 Woah, where did you came from?" I couldn't decide if she was always at that place or if she was a figment of Celestias insanity?
I dearest this fanfic!!!!!! Im a enginer and absolutely adore this fanfic
- teamidrisVor 5 years
  
  Me both of those :o) (but i am a 'biased' engineer in this particuar example) Glad y'all liked it. I wish I could direct you onto more stuff like this, only my other stories arn't along these lines. I did really similar this Ai Pony one though; world wide web.fimfiction.internet/story/62074/friendship-is-optimal
amazing chore!!!!! i love your readings!
I similar the way the fic called the new AI "newborn."
- teamidrisVor 4 years
  
  cheers :o) Information technology felt right for her introduction.
Sun-barrel, that was hilarious.
- unfortunatewitnessXVor 4 years ⁺¹
  
  Due east.B.D LittleShyFiM fabricated that aforementioned joke in his own parody video, History of Equestria.
- LeonSnakeVor 6 years ⁺⁸
  
  @Luke Frie "Am I... Sun-butt?"
Somebody should make an animation of this and then become equus caballus famous.
Fimfiction.Skynet
This was a really good one, I can see why the person wanted you to read it!
THIS WAS Admittedly AMAZING !! information technology was and so well done, this fic- THIS FIC! man it was insane, I love it! Slap-up chore lost!
Holy shit that was crawly. This needs to exist a moving-picture show.
wow that is the best Mlp fanfic I've ever heard
no fictional character should ever effort to get into the existent earth.
From what I gather from the FimFiction summary. Fanfic Twilight comes alive from hacker or some other strength. She has the ability the bring the others "live" likewise.
- teamidrisVor 5 years ⁺¹
  
  Yes, once the artificially intelligent 'being' begins to exist it grabs whatever large information set up it can for an identity. (I was guessing) I thought it might effort to make itself sentient using a common grapheme and Twilight Sparkle is pretty prolific in text course. Then I dropped in 'a happy accident' to show how she could effectively copy-and-paste her base programme and twist herself into new characters for different tasks.
this has to be my favorite fanfic its soo good
I dear the vocal glitching! :D
- teamidrisVor 6 years ⁺²
  
  I well-nigh fell off my seat when I heard the first blitz. The glitchy voices fabricated it special !
i can imagine how much these people must take had fun when they glitched the voices
Finally I've gotten circular to listening to this. And information technology was uploaded on my birthday :D
That...was....insane.
Now I kinda desire to know what happened after that...and then interesting o,o
- Silver Scale ProductionsVor 3 years ⁺¹
  
  Or "Sunbutt" and "Darkweb" stock-still the spider web enough to assist stabilize things, though certain sections probably still would have been pretty screwed up for a long time.
- teamidrisVor vi years ⁺³
  
  I guess it would descend into some civil war, some folk would stay where they were, some would go habitation. It depends a lot on how well the governments could hold their regular army's. I thought after ii generations it would seem like a bad dream? Either way up, for me a sequal became a human story
Those digi ponies completely misinterpreted in simply about everything. Mistaking Friendship for Oppression and Tyranny.
•_• Ohohoh man that was sick.MLP SKYNET. Got nighttime existent fast at the end. Loved it.
JennaVor six years ⁺⁸⁹

Expect... So they shut down the internet?
If that happened....
Me: NOOOOOO[OOOO[OOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
- JazzyVor 6 years ^+four
  
  +Jenna The "JennaIsABadClip-Sharer" Bad Clip-Sharer Unicorn Me: YEAH TOAST!
This is great! #BestMLPstoriesevah!
The narrator sounds like Dusk Shimmer
Haaaa the 'sun barrel' comment is hilarious...
Makes me think of the comic dub where cilestiea and Luna went to the sis Hove'southward social and Luna signed them upward as 'sun butt' and 'moon butt' for information technology...
This was a very interesting fic
That's awesome how you used the music from Tron I beloved that picture
Whoa that was intense gr8 chore ten/10
When information technology said "didn't remember going to sleep" information technology reminded me of my first memory
the "doors" are data ports and how big they are is the amount of data they are comprised of.
- teamidrisVor half-dozen years
  
  +Derek Zerger - Yeh, that sort of cruel out of my head as I set up upwards her virtual room? I needed to show that the ponies took upward a lot of ring width in a way readers could chronicle to. I was pleased to have that metaphor :o)
Did i hear music from Tron? I freaking dearest Tron both Classic and Modern!
This was awesome!!!!!
- teamidrisVor 3 years
  
  Nope, I wrote it and my married woman helped me edit it. I'one thousand a fair bit dyslexic, so information technology took hours :o) She is a star!
- teamidrisVor 3 years
  
  I'thousand glad you liked it :o) Losties narration and friends made information technology epic :D
This is certainly very artistic
Humans...slaves of technological ponies...just smashing
Good story TheLostNarrator this is awesome
Celestia = am I sunbutt very funny 😂😆
- Livi LivVor 4 years ⁺³
  
  Doesn't matter it's funny
- unfortunatewitnessXVor 4 years
  
  Livi Liv LittleShyFiM made that same joke in his own parody video, History of Equestria.
Is it merely me, or does it sound similar Mantra by Tool is playing in the background at around 5:25?
woaaaaah.... astonishing... this IS Crawly!
Nice to include the TRON Legacy soundtrack.
Now I wonder what will happen to Celestia and Luna:Would they try to help humanity despite of the hate that would virtually probable exist directed to them?
I actually enjoyed this. Take a cookie .
SEANVor 3 years ^+eight

Am I...sunday butt?
Yeah,and *Luna* is moon butt,
*Twilight* is star barrel,
Pinkie is balloon butt
RD is cloud barrel,
FS is butterfly butt
AJ is apple tree barrel
The cakes are cake butts
Bonbon
Is..
Bon bon barrel? xD
- North/AVor 3 years ⁺¹
  
  Bon butt
Alas.. Celestia and Luna saved the world.
This is a crossover I never think it will come in this situation *MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS SKYNET* ~!
Edit: if a PONY A.I. computer is existing I won't mind to have as a friend fifty-fifty if information technology's off putting merely beingness every bit "SKYNET" information technology be prissy if it'southward a robot a.i. an not a pc a.i. 🙃
The very tip of her horn moves e'er so slightly from eye to right. Does anyone else observe that?
- teamidrisVor 4 years
  
  I hadn't, merely Losty did an awesome chore on it :o)
I remember these are great good job
damm that was dark and awsome
information technology startet realy nice.. and and so its just getting bether and bether :)
I'thousand closing my eyes and listening. WATCH MY Dorsum ,MICHAEL! (my brother).
A actually interesting fic, simply the ending is a bit confusing. Was there an AI Luna? If so, who created her?
- teamidrisVor 2 years
  
  @Oaken Shadow seems fair. I figured bogus intelligence would be as prone to 'invisible best friends' as existent life? And in that world an imagined friend is a real as anypony else.
- Oaken ShadowVor 2 years ⁺¹
  
  @teamidris Luna was, is, and ever will be an integral part of Celestia, in all her forms. Maybe AI Celestia created AI Luna because she had been shown her backstory and needed Luna to be complete. (conditions consciously/intentionally because AI Celstia knew she needed Luna, or subconsciously/unintentionaly because they are ii sides of the same coin and must always exist together)
- teamidrisVor 2 years
  
  I never figured it out? Who opened the link to the cyberspace when royal was close in her house? Or was Luna only an effort at cosmos by Celestia? Perhaps Luna awakened first and decide to stay depression until it happened again? - I must have re-written that ending five times to go it correct.
Is it me or was there some of Tron Legacy'south soundtrack in there?
HomVor 6 years ⁺⁵

What was the music used in this? I couldn't see it stated anywhere.
I would love to exist transported into Equestria
am I........ sun butt
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD
When I saw the title I was similar: MATRIX!!
November 2019: 70,404 views. Admittedly amazing. I thought we might become a thousand? It is a privilege to keep yous amused ^-^
That strange female, introverted, imperial, pony, in-shape, Majin Boo.
hears that thwilight is in a identify that (most likely) has missles. "she gonna fuck shit upwardly"
YukiVor 6 years ⁺ⁱⁱ

I love the music.
I HEARD THAT TRON THEME. eight^| (kickoff reaction. lol)
oh I just honey this evil!
- teamidrisVor 4 years
  
  The less vindictive I made them, the more evil they became :o) There's something really nasty about a decision-making force ruining your beingness and saying they are helping :D
40k views though :o Wow! I was stunned when it reached 4k :o)
- teamidrisVor four years
  
  Is it actually doing more views per week than it was when it first went upwards? It'southward close if it isn't :o
i heard on equestripedia that equestria canonically gets destroyed by robots terminator style after the bearers are all long dead, then this fic makes a creepy amount of sense
- teamidrisVor 6 Monate
  
  Maybe the same robots existence fought in "Tiggers Tank" ?
AZOTHVor ix Monate ⁺³

Underrated fanfic
- teamidrisVor vi Monate
  
  *feel warm and fuzzy inside at present :o)
that scream scared the hell out of me
How did y'all show who the actors were, like that, in the clarification?
the visual looks like a frowny face xD
- teamidrisVor 4 years
  
  A frowny faced skinny necked alien :o) But it looks mint and Losty made it herself, which is uber absurd :D
Don't mess with Humanity!
PonyNet? The Rise of The Ponies!
- DJ BeowulfVor 4 years
  
  Devon Melon Non their downfall ours
Am I 'Sunday Butt'?
- unfortunatewitnessXVor 4 years
  
  sleepiihead1119 LittleShyFiM fabricated that same joke in his own parody video, History of Equestria.
- joey listerVor v years ^+one
  
  teamidris corking job. well written.
- teamidrisVor 5 years ^+two
  
  I giggled when I wrote that line, but I didn't think it would exist the nigh popular one :o)
Nora.D i can already tell this is going to become chaotic
Astro pony..... Information technology's nice to run across/ hear a colab with different narrations...
TWILIGHT HAS Go Dominant.
The only human resistance is anonymous
What is the music/sound track for this?
This story...it'due south...it's all the creepy
dad?Vor 6 years ^+three

OH MY GOD IT'S And then SCARRYYYYY HOW Will I Sleep?!?!?!?!? *sarcasm*
A1Vor 5 years ⁺²

That's plenty thinking for me.
twilight velvet: honey if you lot keep playing on that pc your gonna become online
twilight sparkle: you cant tell me what to do mom